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The Thought by atomicfeline, literature

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The Thought

A memory of violent yellow Splashes of bluish white jello This was a party of parties Yea, a whole lot of smarties Favorite colored candies all wrapped today The thought of a memory once tucked away It was a thought A selfless thought One that was nagging you but wouldn\'t go away A golden red leaf falls Of early yellow-orange sunset walls A memory that\'s coming back together The feeling of cold tight brisk weather A memory that could have be your own But it wasn\'t It was the thought A selfless caring thought One that is there but isn\'t your own A bright hollow blue summer wails As the children run bringing their pails

This Day by atomicfeline, literature

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This Day

The day hits midnight Another day has come But this day has more light Than the day that just went by What makes this day so special? A day when love is stirred in the air? A heavy mixture that doesn\'t settle? Living beneath the eyes of youth But when the day has gone by like the rest The feeling still hangs like a chain Interlocking pieces that hold their best Never letting go, a feeling on this day But why is this day so dissimilar If all the days that follow seem the same? It\'s because this day is here as a reminder Of all the days that passed Of the love that was there but never expressed A feeling that should\'ve been

A Love to Love by atomicfeline, literature

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A Love to Love

Everyone knows how it feels You remember yourself blushing You held the flowers to your heart It feels like such a rushing A memory of smiles comes to a start He was brushing away your tears Whisking away all your fears Sighing as you watch... He nears A sudden flight and you\'re off He was stroking your face, your skin so soft You\'re expecting him at nine And you feel you\'re on a line What shall you wear? Or does it matter at all? You remember him as feelings rise Like stars from heaven, all knowing and wise He\'s given you the sign It\'s almost time You make up your mind You\'ll be seeing him again You have never been

On That Day by atomicfeline, literature

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On That Day

You woke up late in the day Looking out your window, you say \"What a wonderful day to be born The blazing sun raining worn A rabbit leaves its footprints in snows The leaves fall in the wind that blows And blooming flowers Washes away all my woes.\" For it is that day That fateless day Where it all began And it was on that day Where the cycle ends Yet it comes once a year Never realizing that it\'s near It can fall on any day It\'s when you stop to think and say \"Isn\'t it that day? That fateless, inevitable day When all of last year seems so grey Light shades of black in white A fuzzy memory all but forgotten?\" For i

Remember the Forgotten by atomicfeline, literature

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Remember the Forgotten

I can feel the memmmorrry Slowly coming back to me Something... I forgot A memory of things I sought But could never piece together To finish a puzzle so clever It can be a joyous treat To sing in the memory complete But this memory of hatred The death all things dread Of piling skulls on top of each other The Master on top killing his brother Is a memory I have finally remembered But should have left forgotten How too often it is the case That humans try to cover their face Living their lives as charades Concealed in the darkness that fades Games of solitare that only we play But the truth is in there, it doesn\'t go away

The Time Dream by atomicfeline, literature

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The Time Dream

A clockworking bicycle A slow-melting icicle A pebble drops in the lake The waves move away, not take A leaf dries and withers The dying tree sways and shivers Shivers on the edge of dreams The man\'s sleep is shattered As he gets up from his bed The clock on the wall is ringing Is ringing his soul into flinging Flinging the nearby jar at the truth Just to dream again in his youth The dream where Time was born

The Day of the Rabbit by atomicfeline, literature

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The Day of the Rabbit

It\'s eight o\'clock in the morning, and what do I see? A golden wash of sunlight filtering down over me. The splashes of yellow, The clear light-blue sky, The birds in the treetops their singing so high. I fly out the front door Moving fast across the ground, my mind soars never caring I feel the cool breeze of the summer day never caring I watch a rabbit race across the yard never caring The rabbit so sleek as its fur blows in the wind never caring But I cry out as the rabbit moves into the street My mind never had time to sit in the seat I wasn\'t even ready to rest my feet But my heart went out to it always caring The t

To be like you by atomicfeline, literature

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To be like you

How old must I be, mommy? To be like you The hardships I go through Just to much to bear It isn\'t even fair That you should be much smarter And I\'m compared to water What must it take, mommy? To be like you What does it take? Don\'t I ever get a break? When does it all end? Where is life\'s recess? A few seconds of freedom When I can smell the flowers in the field The dirt beneath my feet Will it ever happen, mommy? Will I become like you? I never feel complete And it seems I can\'t compete There\'s always work to be done Where is all the fun? Is this what life is all about? I never have time to shout How much I woul

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Noise without Sound

Silence or Noise Without Sound ------------------------------- Louder Stronger Splitting Excruciating Without screams, without cries Without moans, without lies Without begging, without pleading Without interruption, without conceding Again and again, silence fills my head Blocking out life, blocking out thought Want to make it stop, but I cannot think ahead All there is is now, and the violence has been brought To you Shattering Exploding Tearing Nauseating No talking No crying No whispers No denying Again and again, silence fills my head What was that sound? Nothing, nothing I want to kill it, beat it, crush it But

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About atomicfeline

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Deviant for 21 years
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Current Residence: Maryland USA
Favourite genre of music: Classical/Fantasy
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MP3 player of choice: Winamp

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Nobuo Uematsu

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Me! :)

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Final Fantasy VII

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PS2

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Microsoft Notepad :)

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Jazz 2, Final Fantasy, Getting work done

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May 4, 2003

Entry #14

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"OMG! THERE IS LIKE A FISH IN THE TUNA FISH CAN IN MY PANTRY!" yelled the chicken in noob language. "Really?" asked the chicken disbelievingly. "YEAH! OMG! LOL! I THINK IT'S A TUNA!" said the chicken yet again in noob lanuage. Been a while since I updated the journal, but Dalspots ~dalspots (https://www.deviantart.com/dalspots) finally finished making that clock I asked her to make a month and a half ago. I also went above the 300 pageview mark, and am nearing the 365 pageview mark, one for every day of the year. Anyhow, school is almost over for me. I've been getting all A's all semester, so even if I fail the finals, I still get an A. Thus, I'm busy relaxing and drinki

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Mar 31, 2003

Entry #13

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"OMG, I can't believe it! Is it? Is it really time?" asks the turtle. "Yes," the chicken said ominously. Oh yeah! I reached 200 pageviews (about time too). School starts again today (I had vacation all last week), so stuff won't be posted here very often (not that anyone views this page anyhow). And if dalspots ~dalspots (https://www.deviantart.com/dalspots) is viewing this, I just want you to know that I will always be waiting... :)

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Mar 26, 2003

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"What rhymes with ish, bish, wish, yish, zish, and gish, but is NOT a tiger?" dalspots ~dalspots (https://www.deviantart.com/dalspots) has been acting a little to fishy lately, or maybe it's just my fishiness. I asked her to draw a picture of a clock without fish on it nearly a week ago! It's like my fishsticks in my freezer came to life and did fishy things that fish do quite often like blow fish bubbles and eat fish food. Oh, and if you happen to guess that fishy riddle I have above, I PROMISE you that I won't fish around looking for a prize because the riddle above is just so fishishly easy.

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Apr 15, 2003

*nods* Yeah I was thinking there was a little too much orange in her. I suppose I can change it to some other color, but what other color could it be? Hmm.. hmm

Thanks for the comment!

Apr 13, 2003

Yeah I know the sword's a little weird, but she's just holding it so I guess it's fine. I mean it's not like she's going into battle or anything :) (Smile)

Thanks for pointing it out those, thanks for the comment also! :D (Big Grin)

spyed

Apr 10, 2003

Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

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spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
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I know. That's why it's going to work.

Do not try and bend the spoon ...

Apr 7, 2003

Thanks for the fac :D (Big Grin)

Very much appreciated! Hug

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