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The ThoughtA memory of violent yellow  Splashes of bluish white jello  This was a party of parties  Yea, a whole lot of smarties  Favorite colored candies all wrapped today  The thought of a memory once tucked away   
It was a thought  A selfless thought  One that was nagging you but wouldn\'t go away   
A golden red leaf falls  Of early yellow-orange sunset walls  A memory that\'s coming back together  The feeling of cold tight brisk weather  A memory that could have be your own  But it wasn\'t   
It was the thought  A selfless caring thought  One that i The Thought
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This DayThe day hits midnight  Another day has come  But this day has more light  Than the day that just went by   
What makes this day so special?  A day when love is stirred in the air?  A heavy mixture that doesn\'t settle?  Living beneath the eyes of youth   
But when the day has gone by like the rest  The feeling still hangs like a chain  Interlocking pieces that hold their best  Never letting go, a feeling on this day   
But why is this day so dissimilar  If all the days that follow seem the same?  It\'s because this day is here as a reminder  Of all the d This Day
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A Love to LoveEveryone knows how it feels  You remember yourself blushing  You held the flowers to your heart  It feels like such a rushing  A memory of smiles comes to a start  He was brushing away your tears  Whisking away all your fears  Sighing as you watch... He nears  A sudden flight and you\'re off  He was stroking your face, your skin so soft   
You\'re expecting him at nine  And you feel you\'re on a line  What shall you wear?  Or does it matter at all?  You remember him as feelings rise  Like stars from heaven, all knowing and wise  He\'s given you the sign   A Love to Love
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On That DayYou woke up late in the day  Looking out your window, you say  \"What a wonderful day to be born  The blazing sun raining worn  A rabbit leaves its footprints in snows  The leaves fall in the wind that blows  And blooming flowers  Washes away all my woes.\"   
For it is that day  That fateless day  Where it all began  And it was on that day  Where the cycle ends   
Yet it comes once a year  Never realizing that it\'s near  It can fall on any day  It\'s when you stop to think and say  \"Isn\'t it that day?  That fateless, inevitable day  Wh On That Day
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Entry #14

Sun May 4, 2003, 8:08 AM
"OMG! THERE IS LIKE A FISH IN THE TUNA FISH CAN IN MY PANTRY!" yelled the chicken in noob language.
"Really?" asked the chicken disbelievingly.
"YEAH! OMG! LOL! I THINK IT'S A TUNA!" said the chicken yet again in noob lanuage.

Been a while since I updated the journal, but Dalspots finally finished making that clock I asked her to make a month and a half ago. I also went above the 300 pageview mark, and am nearing the 365 pageview mark, one for every day of the year.

Anyhow, school is almost over for me. I've been getting all A's all semester, so even if I fail the finals, I still get an A. Thus, I'm busy relaxing and drinking coffee and staying up late. You see, I just got the net on my bedroom computer recently so everything is looking up. I am not, however, applying to a Yeshiva in Israel like I should be. Laziness strikes again I guess...
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  • Current Residence: Maryland USA
  • Interests: Jazz 2, Final Fantasy, Getting work done
  • Favourite movie: Movies? What are those?
  • Favourite band or musician: Nobuo Uematsu
  • Favourite genre of music: Classical/Fantasy
  • Favourite poet or writer: Me! :)
  • Operating System: Windowz XP
  • MP3 player of choice: Winamp
  • Favourite game: Final Fantasy VII
  • Favourite gaming platform: PS2
  • Tools of the Trade: Microsoft Notepad :)

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~iduck:iconiduck: Apr 15, 2003, 4:53:44 PM
*nods* Yeah I was thinking there was a little too much orange in her. I suppose I can change it to some other color, but what other color could it be? Hmm.. hmm Thanks for the comment!
~iduck:iconiduck: Apr 13, 2003, 9:19:16 AM
Yeah I know the sword's a little weird, but she's just holding it so I guess it's fine. I mean it's not like she's going into battle or anything :) (Smile) Thanks for pointing it out those, thanks for the comment also! :D (Big Grin)
$spyed:iconspyed: Apr 10, 2003, 3:19:13 AM
Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

Fella Point Right spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
Ninja Point Right I know. That's why it's going to work.

Do not try and bend the spoon ...

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The Angry Deviant

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~iduck:iconiduck: Apr 6, 2003, 7:16:34 PM
Thanks for the fac :D (Big Grin) Very much appreciated! Hug Glad you like it
~iduck:iconiduck: Mar 30, 2003, 3:18:33 PM
I'm aware of the arm-wrongness now, but it's too late to change it! Ah well, thanks for the comment and pointing it out! :) (Smile)
~darkaleph:icondarkaleph: Mar 25, 2003, 2:09:25 PM
hey, thanks for the comment ^_^; I've read the five latest poems/deviations you have so far and I've got to say, there's this catchiness to your poems..which can be likened to an old wanderer walking down a roadside singing philosophical tunes (if there is such a thing..and no offense by the way..it was a compliment and a positive overall critique^_~);.. gotta zoom..classes to attend O_o... anyhow, keep up the good work =) (Smile)

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"There's a fork in the road. Hmm.. which way should I go? East, west or south?" "You know what? give me that fork, I have nothing to eat with."
~fezz:iconfezz: Mar 22, 2003, 3:53:52 PM
Exeelent poems! X3 Ill Advertise ya on my site...chu are good.... #1 :D (Big Grin)

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Some annoying boy told me to change my signature. heres to him.
~atmcdragon:iconatmcdragon: Mar 5, 2003, 8:47:30 PM
I added you to my list. Never forget how good your poems are. I adore them alot, and you've put great amounts of vocabulary and thought in them. I feel the emotion rushing through me when I read them, you have a talent with poetry man. Never give up on it, even when things look its darkest.

In other words....

You Kick Ass. #1

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"Is he not a superman?
Aryan Pure Superman!
Ja, We ist der supermen!
Super duper superman!"

Spike Jones, you devil, you!
~martez:iconmartez: Mar 3, 2003, 7:57:42 PM
Thanks for the comment on "The Last Story," I appreciate it. Yeah, I did lie to her; the worst kind, too. Well, it's a long story. But thanks for the comment :) (Smile)

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-Martez
~iduck:iconiduck: Feb 27, 2003, 4:56:26 PM
Thanks a bunch for the comment and fav! Welcome to DA, enjoy your stay :D (Big Grin)
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